Knowing the rules so you can break them
- Haynes Academy
- Apr 6, 2022
- 2 min read
In Mr. Windham's Creative Writing class, students learn the traditional hallmarks of classic poetry and practice them, and then they are given the freedom to break those rules.
The results are an interesting mix of the traditional and nontraditional, as in this poem by senior Zachary Daigle:
Earth rises out of the Water, like a swan upon a lake
Air covers over the Earth, covering every inch with no mistake
Fire spreads among all, roaring its loud name at rapid speeds
Water douses the Fire, healing the world and feeding the seeds
The burning of a log creates smoke so strong it can cook meats
This very smoke that the atmosphere absorbs and defeats
The release of steam, returning to water as clear as a crystal
And ash which returns to Earth, forming as strong as a pistol
Snip-snap-whoosh. Crackle. Hiss.
Fire lets its presence known, as it swallows any abyss
Rumble. Crunch. Howl.
Earth gives when others need, from humans to bugs to even an owl
Swish. Flutter. Waft.
Air adapts to any scenario, intelligent but its heart is soft
Splish-splash. Spray. Drip.
Water is caring yet full of fear, but there is nothing it will ever skip
These four do often brawl, and claim they are nothing alike
Which is the strongest, toughest, and has the best strike
Who is the most noble, one who towers over the rest
Who prevails among them all, who is simply the best
Only time will tell who is the true victor among them all
Who will rise to the top, and who will plummet and fall
Their differences shine in battle, but their similarities should too
But the conflict never ends, and days without battle is just about few
A battle since Big Bang, a battle since the planet formed
A battle since time showed, a battle that inevitably stormed
The power to destroy, the power to heal
The power to construct, the power to feel
Burning woods, rocky pavement
Splashing puddles, a breezy event
Seen in nature, all vital to spirit and life
Yet they continue to fight, each hand holding a knife
Why can’t they just bond and be civil with one another?
In a way, they are as close as sister and brother
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